Sejla, ** Use black for formal writing and center your title. Your last two paragraphs are not indented. Some punctuation and word choice issues. Some poorly structured sentences. Introduction: You have a good introduction. Your final sentence is conversational. Expository writing should be formal. Supporting Paragraphs: Your support your opinions well. Conclusion: Your conclusion should restate your three main points in different words. After that, your last two sentences are very good. Overall, you followed the structure well and had good support for your opinions. 18/25
Sejla,
ReplyDelete** Use black for formal writing and center your title.
Your last two paragraphs are not indented.
Some punctuation and word choice issues. Some poorly structured sentences.
Introduction: You have a good introduction. Your final sentence is conversational. Expository writing should be formal.
Supporting Paragraphs: Your support your opinions well.
Conclusion: Your conclusion should restate your three main points in different words. After that, your last two sentences are very good.
Overall, you followed the structure well and had good support for your opinions.
18/25