Describing a person
I know a women named Alma Drincic. She is has an oval shape head with her honey blond hair flowing down beside her bluish green eyes, Every time you look into her eyes it looks like there dancing with joy. She has a medium sized nose and pinkish peach lips and she has a beautiful smile. Her face is covered with freckles all over. She has many different styles but her most common style is girly. She loves purse and shoes. So to me is very pretty.
She is a fun loving, and caring women and mother. Her personality is out going, fun, cool awesome, funny and always happy.one thing I most love about her is she is a good friends and a awesome mom. She knows how to have fun with friends and family.
By: Sejla Drincic
Sejla,
ReplyDeleteIndent (tab) the first sentences of paragraphs.
There are some word choice/grammar issues - “woman”, not “women”. “is has”. “they’re”, not “there”,etc.
Overall, you have used some very good descriptive words and phrases, and your paragraphs are organized well. Good effort.
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